NOTION: Journal of Linguistics, Literature, and Culture
Vol. 7 No. 2 (2025): NOTION: Journal of Linguistics, Literature, and Culture

Rhetorical moves in Indonesian’ students research proposal introductions: A corpus-based genre analysis using the CARS model

Samsi, Yogi (Unknown)



Article Info

Publish Date
14 Nov 2025

Abstract

This study addresses a critical gap in genre analysis by examining the rhetorical moves in the introductions of research proposals written by Indonesian undergraduate students. Adopting a corpus-based genre analysis approach, this research applies Swales's (1990) Create-A-Research-Space (CARS) model as its analytical framework. The corpus consists of 30 texts. While the analysis confirms the presence of Move 1 (Establishing a Territory) and Move 3 (Occupying the Niche), the most striking finding is the near-total absence of Move 2 (Establishing a Niche) in the students' writing. This result suggests that students lack the rhetorical skills to identify a gap in existing literature. The study argues that this deficit is a significant pedagogical issue, not a mere reflection of the small corpus size. The findings underscore a need for EAP instruction to focus more on teaching students how to critically engage with literature and articulate a research gap. This research offers valuable insights for curriculum development and teaching strategies aimed at improving students' academic writing skills.

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notion

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Arts Humanities Languange, Linguistic, Communication & Media

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NOTION – “Journal of Linguistics, Literature, and Culture” is a peer reviewed journal which accepts high quality research articles. It is a journal published twice a year at the end of May and November. We welcome submissions focusing on theories, methods, and applications in Linguistics ...