RETORIKA: Jurnal Ilmu Bahasa
Vol. 10 No. 2 (2024)

Analysis of Correspondence Capabilities of Personnel Staff of Military Resort Command 044/Garuda Dempo

Ayu Puspita Indah Sari (Faculty of Social Humanities, Universitas Bina Darma Palembang)
Rahmi Fadilla (Faculty of Social Humanities, Universitas Bina Darma Palembang)



Article Info

Publish Date
23 Dec 2024

Abstract

Effective correspondence is essential for clear and professional communication, particularly in administrative settings. This study investigates the correspondence abilities of personnel staff at Military Resort Command 044/Garuda Dempo, focusing on common language errors and strategies for improvement. Using a qualitative method with a descriptive approach, the research analyzed official letters and conducted interviews to gather comprehensive insights. The findings reveal that staff proficiency in correspondence is low, marked by frequent deviations from standard formats and ineffective sentence structures. These deficiencies are primarily attributed to a lack of formal training in official letter writing. To address these issues, the study recommends implementing targeted training programs, providing constructive feedback, using exemplary models of correspondence, conducting regular writing exercises, and leveraging supportive tools. These interventions aim to enhance the staff’s ability to produce clear and effective official communication

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jret

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Subject

Education Languange, Linguistic, Communication & Media

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RETORIKA: Jurnal Ilmu Bahasa, 2406-9019 (Print ISSN), 2443-0668 (Electronic ISSN) is the Journal of Linguistics who published research articles and of theoretical articles in linguistic science which published by Linguistic Department, Postgraduated Program, Universitas Warmadewa. The journal is ...