Lingue : Jurnal Bahasa, Budaya, dan Sastra
Vol. 8 No. 1 (2026): Indonesian Language and Literature Studies

FROM AWARENESS TO RHETORICAL CONTROL: STUDENT WRITERS’ HOOKS AND READER ENGAGEMENT IN ARGUMENTATIVE INTRODUCTIONS

Rahmadila Eka Putri (Politeknik Negeri Sriwijaya, Indonesia)
Reni Juitama (Politeknik Negeri Sriwijaya, Indonesia)
Chelsea Aisyah Nadine (Politeknik Negeri Sriwijaya, Indonesia)



Article Info

Publish Date
23 Jun 2026

Abstract

This study investigates students’ strategic use of hooks and their perceptions of hooks as rhetorical strategies for enhancing reader engagement, highlighting the gap between conceptual understanding and rhetorical execution. Employing a descriptive quantitative design combined with text-based rhetorical analysis, this study examined the argumentative introductions of 20 applied undergraduate students alongside questionnaire data covering five metacognitive dimensions. The analysis showed an uneven distribution of hook types, dominated by question hooks (45%), followed by scenario (25%) and statistical hooks (15%), while general (10%) and provoking statements (5%) were minimally used, indicating a restricted and formulaic repertoire. Questionnaire results revealed consistently high mean scores, namely awareness (M = 2.78), selection strategy (M = 2.70), reader engagement (M = 2.73), reader orientation (M = 2.76), and writing reflection (M = 2.74), suggesting strong perceived awareness. However, item-level findings exposed key gaps where only 45% reported using varied hooks, 65% considered audience and purpose, and just 20% expressed confidence in writing introductions. These results indicated that students’ awareness remained largely declarative and procedural rather than strategic and flexible. Despite demonstrating relatively high rhetorical awareness, students still exhibited limited rhetorical control, constrained variation, partial audience orientation, and low confidence in constructing introductions. This finding emphasizes the necessity of explicit modeling, strategic variation, audience-oriented practice, and iterative feedback. Overall, the findings positioned student writers within a transitional phase from awareness toward rhetorical control, where metacognitive understanding had not yet fully transformed into effective rhetorical performance.

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Journal Info

Abbrev

lingue

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Subject

Arts Education Languange, Linguistic, Communication & Media Social Sciences

Description

Lingue merupakan jurnal ilmiah yang diterbitkan oleh Pusat Pengembangan Bahasa Institut Agama Islam Negeri (IAIN) Ambon mulai tahun 2019. Jurnal ini memuat tulisan ilmiah berupa hasil penelitian atau gagasan konseptual tentang kajian kebahasaan, kebudayaan, dan sastra. Penulis dalam jurnal ini ...