Acuity : Journal of English Language Pedagogy, Literature and Culture
Vol. 11 No. 2 (2026): Acuity: Journal of English Language Pedagogy, Literature and Culture

The Effectiveness of the Modified Think Pair Share Technique with Mind Mapping on EFL Students' Descriptive Writing Ability

Mia Chairunnisa (Universitas Lampung)
Cucu Sutarsyah (Universitas Lampung)
Budi Kadaryanto (Universitas Lampung)



Article Info

Publish Date
24 Jun 2026

Abstract

This study investigated whether there was a significant difference in descriptive writing ability between seventh-grade EFL students taught using the Modified Think-Pair-Share (TPS) Technique and those taught using the Original TPS Technique. The modification integrated Mind Mapping into the 'Think' phase of TPS, providing students with a structured visual pre-writing scaffold before collaborative discussion and writing. An experimental design was employed involving 61 seventh-grade students at SMPN 22 Bandar Lampung during the 2025–2026 academic year: 31 students in the experimental group (Modified TPS) and 30 students in the control group (Original TPS). Writing ability was measured through pre-test and post-test tasks requiring descriptive texts about animals, scored using Jacobs' (1981) five-aspect analytic rubric—content, organization, vocabulary, language use, and mechanics. The instruments were validated through expert judgment (Aiken's V = 0.9166) and inter-rater reliability was confirmed (pre-test r = .937; post-test r = .925). An Independent Samples t-test on post-test scores yielded t(51.8) = 4.739, p < .001, with the experimental group achieving a significantly higher post-test mean (M = 82.26) than the control group (M = 76.78), and a large effect size (Cohen's d = 1.607). These findings confirm that the Modified TPS Technique is significantly more effective than the Original TPS Technique in improving seventh-grade EFL students' descriptive writing ability.

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Journal Info

Abbrev

acuity

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Subject

Education Languange, Linguistic, Communication & Media

Description

Journal of English Language Pedagogy, Literature and Culture (Jelpedlic) is the research journal for the Teaching of English, Literature & Culture. It publishes research-based articles, reviews and poems, which reflect on every aspect of English teaching. The journal also considers new developments ...