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Mohamad Afrizal
Universitas Muhammadiyah Jember
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Analisis Penyuntingan Kalimat Efektif pada Naskah Novel “Berjuta Rasanya” Karya “Tere Liye” Dewi Insyiroh; Inayah Alfina Wulandari; Shafa Aura Anindya; Mohamad Afrizal
Protasis: Jurnal Bahasa, Sastra, Budaya, dan Pengajarannya Vol. 5 No. 1 (2026): Juni: Jurnal Bahasa, Sastra, Budaya, dan Pengajarannya
Publisher : Pusat Riset dan Inovasi Nasional

Show Abstract | Download Original | Original Source | Check in Google Scholar | DOI: 10.55606/protasis.v5i1.269

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This study aims to analyze the application of effective sentences in the novel Berjuta Rasanya by Tere Liye and to examine relevant aspects of manuscript editing. An effective sentence is one that conveys ideas precisely, clearly, and without ambiguity. In literary works, the use of effective sentences plays a crucial role in maintaining readability and the aesthetic quality of the language. This research employs a qualitative descriptive method using content analysis techniques. The data are drawn from sentences in the novel that reflect the characteristics of balance, economy, parallelism, logic, variation, and emphasis. The results indicate that the novel contains both effective sentences and sentences requiring editing, particularly in terms of economy and parallelism. The editing process was carried out in accordance with Indonesian grammar rules while preserving the author's distinctive style. The implications of this research may serve as a reference for literary manuscript editing and text-based Indonesian language learning.
Analisis Kritis Kesalahan Ejaan dan Tanda Baca dalam Novel Laut Bercerita Karya Leila S. Chudori Anisa Maulidiya Istikomah; Dista Dwi Maharani; Dea Suryaningtyas; Mohamad Afrizal
Jurnal Membaca (Bahasa dan Sastra Indonesia) Vol 11, No 1 (2026): Jurnal Membaca (Bahasa dan Sastra Indonesia)
Publisher : Universitas Sultan Ageng Tirtayasa

Show Abstract | Download Original | Original Source | Check in Google Scholar | DOI: 10.30870/jmbsi.v11i1.41527

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This study analyzes language editing in the novel Laut Bercerita by Leila S. Chudori, focusing on spelling and punctuation errors based on the Indonesian Spelling Guidelines (PUEBI). Using a descriptive qualitative method, the study examines forms of errors, underlying linguistic factors, and their categorization. Data were collected through intensive reading of the novel and documentation of linguistic inaccuracies. The data were then analyzed using PUEBI and the Kamus Besar Bahasa Indonesia (KBBI). The findings reveal errors related to capitalization, nonstandard words, foreign-term writing, and punctuation use. These deviations are influenced by spoken-language interference, stylistic choices, and aesthetic considerations. Some deviations also function as literary devices that enhance characterization, emotional expression, and narrative atmosphere. The study emphasizes the importance of contextual language editing in literary works by balancing linguistic accuracy with artistic expression.
Analisis Keefektifan Kalimat dalam Pemberitaan Kasus Perselingkuhan Selebritas pada Rubrik DetikHot Faizatul Khoiriyah; Miftahul Jennah; Nanda Berlian Dwi Maulita; Mohamad Afrizal
Student Research Journal Vol. 4 No. 3 (2026): Student Research Journal
Publisher : Sekolah Tinggi Ilmu Administrasi (STIA) Yappi Makassar

Show Abstract | Download Original | Original Source | Check in Google Scholar | DOI: 10.55606/srj-yappi.v4i3.2602

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The aim of this study is to describe the ineffectiveness of sentences in reports on celebrity infidelity in the DetikHot section of the Detik.com online media. The study uses a qualitative approach with a descriptive method because it focuses on analysing linguistic phenomena in news texts. The data source for the study was the sentences in the news articles about celebrity infidelity, which were selected using the purposive sampling technique. Data were collected using the documentation method by reading, noting and classifying data based on the criteria for effective sentences. Data analysis was conducted through the stages of data reduction, data presentation, and conclusion drawing. The results of the study show that there is still a lot of ineffective language use in DetikHot reports, such as wordiness in the phrase 'Masalah yang menyeret nama selebgram Azizah Salsha masih terus bergulir', unclear sentence structure in the phrase 'demi pengakuan suami selingkuh', and the use of non-standard words in the phrase 'bikin heboh'. It was also found that there was the use of illogical sentences and the incorrect choice of words, which caused the information to become ambiguous and less effective. The most common errors were wordiness and unclear sentence structure. This study shows that the quality of journalistic language in online media still needs to be improved to ensure that the information conveyed is clearer, more concise, logical, and easier for readers to understand.  
Analisis Kesalahaan Penggunaan Kalimat Efektif dalam Novel “Dilan, Dia adalah Dilanku Tahun 1990” Karya “Pidi Baiq” Mulyadi Bagas Wicaksono; A. Rizki Wahyu Pradana; Dewi Ayu Setianingsih; Mohamad Afrizal
Jurnal Pendidikan, Bahasa dan Budaya Vol. 5 No. 2 (2026): Juni: Jurnal Pendidikan, Bahasa dan Budaya
Publisher : Lembaga Pengembangan Kinerja Dosen

Show Abstract | Download Original | Original Source | Check in Google Scholar | DOI: 10.55606/jpbb.v5i2.6312

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This study aims to identify, classify, and analyze errors in the use of effective sentences in the novel Dilan: Dia adalah Dilanku Tahun 1990 by Pidi Baiq. A qualitative descriptive method was employed, with data collected through reading and note-taking techniques. The data source was the novel Dilan: Dia adalah Dilanku Tahun 1990, while data analysis involved the stages of data collection, classification, analysis, presentation, and conclusion drawing. The findings identified 15 errors related to the use of effective sentences, including word redundancy, subject repetition, excessive use of emphasis markers, ineffective sentence structures, and ambiguous expressions. Word redundancy emerged as the most dominant error, characterized by unnecessary repetition and excessive language elements that reduced sentence economy. Subject repetition and excessive emphasis markers also decreased sentence efficiency and clarity, while ineffective structures and ambiguous wording affected the precision of meaning. These findings indicate that several sentences in the novel do not fully meet the principles of effective writing, particularly regarding economy, clarity, and accuracy. However, these linguistic features also contribute to the novel’s distinctive narrative style, characterization, and communicative atmosphere. This study provides valuable insights into the application of effective sentence principles in literary works and is expected to serve as a reference for language studies, literary criticism, and editing practices.
Formulasi dan Kesantunan Tindak Tutur Izin ke Kamar Mandi dalam Bahasa Indonesia Mijianti, Yerry; Afrizal, Mohamad
GERAM Vol. 14 No. 2 (2026): GERAM (Gerakan Aktif Menulis)
Publisher : Program Studi Pendidikan Bahasa dan Sastra Indonesia FKIP Universitas Islam Riau

Show Abstract | Download Original | Original Source | Check in Google Scholar | DOI: 10.25299/geram.2026.28066

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Asking for permission to go to the bathroom is a common linguistic practice in daily interactions, yet it carries complex pragmatic implications as it involves both individual needs and the orderliness of social interaction. This study aims to describe the formulation of bathroom permission speech acts in Indonesian and the pragmatic impact of these formulations on interaction. The study focuses on lexical variations, speech forms and structures, politeness strategies, and the acceptability of utterances across various interactional contexts. A qualitative approach with field research methods was employed. Oral data of bathroom permission utterances were collected through Discourse Completion Tasks (DCT), in-depth interviews, and covert field experiment. The data were analyzed using descriptive pragmatics, considering the speech situation, formulation structure, and the hearer's response. The results indicate that bathroom permission formulations are dominated by euphemistic locational references with the three most dominant lexicons being ke belakang (going to the back), ke kamar mandi (going to the bathroom), and toilet, and realized through indirect speech. The speech structure is graded according to the level of formality, ranging from complete structures in formal contexts to minimal structures in everyday settings. Furthermore, verbal and non-verbal politeness strategies play a crucial role in maintaining utterance acceptability and interactional flow, positioning bathroom permission as a socially negotiated cooperative interruption. Theoretically, this study contributes to the development of formulaic language studies in Indonesia by mapping social routine speech patterns that bridge individual biological needs with cultural politeness norms.
Co-Authors A Rizki Wahyu Pradana A. Rizki Wahyu Pradana Adilah Puja Rahmawati Agus Pranata, Yuda Aini, Nabila Nur Amir Ma'ruf Andaru, Dimas Anggraeni, Astri Widyaruli Anggraeni, Nia Ani Rafika Sari Anindya Oktaviona Ervinawati Anisa Maulidiya Istikomah Aprilia, Cahyani Ardiansyah, Muhammad Hardika Ardike, Happy Dwi Arina , Ukhtul Iffah Daat Artamevia, Rayma Astri Widyaruli Anggraeni Astri Widyaruli Anggraeni Ayu Kirani, Dewi Nirwana Bintang Ramadhan, M Dwi Bintang Ramadhan, Muhammad Dwi Cantika Kunthi Prabandari Cicin Dwi Quraini Citraningrum, Dina Merdeka Citraningurm, Dina Merdeka Dea Gitta Darda Dea Suryaningtyas Dewi Ayu Setianingsih Dewi Ayu Setianingsih Dewi Insyiroh Dewi Nirwana Ayu Kirani Dista Dwi Maharani Doviani, Belva Yulia Faizatul Khoiriyah Fatima Azizah, Andini Fatmawati Fatmawati Fatmawati, Fatmawati Fatwa, Yuniar Firjinia Fauziah, Putri Nur Febriyanti , Dela Febriyanti, Weni Fina Diah Ayu Wulandari Fitri Sakinah Girinti , Hasyikana R Hadi, Syamsul Handika Saputra Hasan Suaedi Inayah Alfina Wulandari Indah Tri Susanti Indahwiya , Nuning Inez Khansa Monica Isfirnasan Andaniya Isnanda, Wheka Istikomah, Anisa Maulidiya Jasmin Fauzia Karina Salsabila Khoiriyah, Alfi Laila Nurmayanti Lathif, M. Toyyib Musthofa Laylatul Musoffa Lestari, Febrianti Dwi Lestari, Marselia Dwi Luki Alifvia Majidatun Nur Aini Majidatun Nuraini Mar’atus Sholihah Maulana Muhamad, Randi Miftahul Jennah Mijanti, Yerry Mijianti, Yerry Mochammad Ryan Syazaki Moh. Hadi Kusuma Muhammad Faizin Muhammad Farhan Arby Mulyadi Bagas Wicaksono Mulyadi Bagas Wicaksono Najma Hanina Nanda Berlian Dwi Maulita Ningsih, Trilia Warta Novi Afriliya Nurmaulidia Nurmaulidia Nurul Lailatuz Zakiyah Premesti, Ellita Dwi Destiana Putri Nabila Sulfa Putri, Fungsi dan Podcast Rahmawati, Erdita Nur Reykasari, Yunita Rohmatulloh, Desy Ryanitha Prameswari Salfina, Afrilia Putri Satuwin, Dista Dwi Maharani Setiayadi, Salsabila Naura Shafa Aura Anindya Shinta Nur fadilah Sila Rahmatina Siti Nur Azizah Sofhan, Irfan Kholid Suhandono Suhandono Weni Febriyanti Widianata, Fogi Septian Wulandari, Yessy Putri Yanny Tuharyati Yerry Mijianti Yesha Tri Anita Utami Yunita Reykasari Zahra Al Muhdlar, Hanina